其次,教给学习方法。课文的2——3节,情感相通,写法相似。常见的教法是教师提出这样一个问题让学生思考:金柳、青荇这两个意象包含了诗人怎样的情感?但问题是学生往往无从着手,因为高一学生对意象这一术语还比较陌生,更别说分析物象中所包含的思想情感了。刘老师把第二节作为一个例子,抓住“金”“艳”等几个关键词,引导学生去揣摩、品味“柳”这一物象中所包含的思想感情,教给学生分析意象的方法和途径。在此基础上,通过彼此讨论,便十分顺利地理解了“青荇”这一物象所要表现的思想情感。
最后是无疑处生疑,拓展延伸。“油油的在水底招摇”和“夏虫也为我沉默,沉默是今晚的康桥”的表现手法及其作用,在我所听过的众多《再别康桥》课堂教学中,几乎没有一位教师对此做过探讨。刘老师在深入钻研教材的基础上,突破教参的限制,引导学生对这一问题做了深入的讨论,并以杜甫《月夜》为例,做了适度的延伸学习。
Very quietly I take my leave
As quietly as I came here;
Quietly I wave good-bye
To the rosy clouds in the western sky.
The golden willows by the riverside
Are young brides in the setting sun;
Their reflections on the shimmering waves
Always linger in the depth of my heart.
The floatingheart growing in the sludge
Sways leisurely under the water;
In the gentle waves of Cambridge
I would be a water plant!
That pool under the shade of elm trees
Holds not water but the rainbow from the sky;
Shattered to pieces among the duckweeds
Is the sediment of a rainbow-like dream?
To seek a dream? Just to pole a boat upstream
To where the green grass is more verdant;
Or to have the boat fully loaded with starlight
And sing aloud in the splendour of starlight.
But I cannot sing aloud
Quietness is my farewell music;
Even summer insects heep silence for me
Silent is Cambridge tonight!
Very quietly I take my leave
As quietly as I came here;
Gently I flick my sleeves
Not even a wisp of cloud will I bring away
轻轻的我走了,
正如我轻轻的来;
我轻轻的招手,
作别西天的云彩。
那河畔的金柳
是夕阳中的新娘
波光里的艳影,
在我的心头荡漾。
软泥上的青荇,
油油的在水底招摇;
在康河的柔波里,
我甘心做一条水草
那榆荫下的一潭,
不是清泉,是天上虹
揉碎在浮藻间,
沉淀着彩虹似的梦。
寻梦? 撑一支长篙,
向青草更青处漫溯,
满载一船星辉,
在星辉斑斓里放歌
但我不能放歌,
悄悄是别离的笙箫;
夏虫也为我沉默,
沉默是今晚的康桥!
悄悄的我走了,
正如我悄悄的来
我挥一挥衣袖
不带走一片云彩
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