sp;                    荷叶  多、生意盎然:田田 
                           高、美:亭亭、舞女的裙 
                         颜色:点缀着些白花 
            荷塘  荷花  姿态:袅娜地开着(盛开) 
                              羞涩地打着朵儿(含苞) 
                           光亮:明珠、星星 
                     荷香:渺茫的歌声 
                     荷波:象闪电、霎时、凝碧 
三、细写           荷水:脉脉 
 荷塘月色         (叶子:更见风致) 
                    从月色的角度,正面写:如流水、泻 
                                         青雾:薄薄,似牛乳 
                                             似轻纱 
                    从景物的角度,反衬: 叶子与花:似梦 
             月色                       树影:黑影、倩影 
                                          光与影:不均匀、和谐 
                                             如名曲 
                   写月光下        近景  从面上写:树色阴阴、 
                   的荷塘四周                      似烟雾  
                             静态        从点上写:杨柳丰姿 
                                   远景:隐隐约约的远山 
                                  (仰视) 
                                   平视:路灯:无精打采 
                             动态:蝉鸣、蛙叫 
                             心态:我什么也没有(照应二) 
     

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